This is the English lesson Maki asked for. Class, pay attention!! Here’s the English excerpt from the original post on Taku & Maki’s blog. The (corrected version) immediately follows with changes in bold. Taku & Maki, where you don’t see changes you got it right!
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Now, we are staying at whitehorse!! we want to see the northen light!! (We want to see the northern lights!!) we are enjoying at world of -20?. (we are enjoying the world of -20?.) Next stop is ALASKA??? ??????
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How are you doing?
We finally have arrived at Yukon yesterday. (We finally arrived in the Yukon yesterday.)
We took a trip by way of California, Yosemite and so on. Anyway we went to shopping to buy some food yesterday. (Anyway we went shopping to buy some food yesterday.)
About 30 minutes walk from supermarket to our hostel. (It’s about a 30 minute walk from the supermarket to our hostel.)
But when we got buck to hostel our lettuce was frozen!! (But when we got back to the hostel our lettuce was frozen!!)
And my hair,too!! It’s unbelievable thing, isn’t it?! (It’s an unbelievable thing, isn’t it?!)
Elaine+Dan how did you write the japanese???? (we used the Hiragana keyboard on our Mac)
I was impressed about that!!! (I was impressed with that!!!)
You must become JAPANESE!!!
Becouse of you took too much soy souse, rice, nori, sashimi! (Because you
took (Maki, do you mean “ate”?) too much soy sauce, rice, nori, and sashimi!)
That’s great things! (Those are great things! (Maybe- Maki do you mean great that we will become Japanese or great that we ate lots of soy sauce, nori, etc.?))
Ok,teachers.Now please corect our sentence+spelling. (Now please correct our sentences + spelling.)
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Very good work! We hope you’re having fun in the Yukon and Alaska- glad you’ve seen the northern lights. We enjoyed your pictures!